Erm!!!
Terrible. I'm sorry but this is so awful words can't explain
Take my advice as a composer and singer. Improve the melody and increase this whole whisper thing you got going on your voice is most likely more powerful than you are letting on.
Also if you remake tis make it shorter five minutes is way too long for such a slow and frankly boring song.
Improve on these factors and you will get a much higher score but for now it a lowly 3
Thanking you greatly
Recently I have been struggling to find inspiration for a new short story I wish to write, but after hearing this the ideas have come flooding back, of course once it is written all credit will go to you and your user name, once again I thank you
P.s a marvellous piece both calming yet adventurous, truly fantastic work
Thank you again EG330
Whenever you get your short story done, Send us a link or something so we can check it out! Thanks!
-Jason
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The thoughts running through my head
When I listen to this I can imagine a small boy or girl finding an ancient book in an empty grassland and when he/she opens it takes them back through time, and as they stand still the world rushes around them in reverse, seeing great battles, civilisations rising and falling, people living their lives, oceans rising and falling, zooming through all the seasons from spring to winter in a blink of an eye. Then suddenly the book closes and drops the boy/girl in an ancient time forgotten by modern people. A time of great spires, immense cities of stone and wood, a time of peace and prosperity among all beings, then at the end with the cymbal crash they drop the book, and are sucked back to their time, and then they look up and have a grin on their face.
(Sorry got carried away)
Amazing song though
That's a really nice picture.. thanks for sharing!
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requiem for supermen