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[-B7- 7he Experiment]

Experiment X

This beast is foul, but fuck me, it can dance. RAVE!!!

Burn7 responds:

LOL, okay, that's the first time in a while I've actually typed "lol" and meant it.

Thanks for making my visit to this damned site worthwhile :D

[CKC - Desert Child]

I absolutely love this

I wrote down what came to mind when hearing this.

My eyes began to flicker open as the darkness that was once my vision diluted and became a brilliant light. The light shone its warmth over my helmet which in turn pierced my dust covered visor. I let out a cough as my lungs shook with life. My ears were immediately kissed by the sound of a solitary wind cascading over my body. For a second I lay still, I took a long inhale and felt my lungs expand with the stale humid air that surrounded me. Slowly my limp body regained its strength as I rolled onto my side, as I did I wiped my glass visor with my two fingers and exhaled. As my sight though the visor became clear my pupils began to constrict from the light. With my body slowly awakening from its forced slumber I felt a sharp pain on my left side. I moved my hand downward until I came to a small patch of blood that had soaked through my clothing. Lifting my hand back up to my eye line I pulled myself up into a sitting position. Peering downward hesitantly I gazed at the wound. Before me was a small hole. The hole went through my breastplate and into my left side. The wound seemed to be throbbing, as with every breath I took the hole enlarged then became smaller. I fell backward onto the ground in pain and tilted my head to the side. My eyes then became fixated on Sarah. Her helmet had been cracked and as a result I could see into her eyes through my visor. I lifted myself up and let out a painful groan as my entire body seemed to creek into life. Holding my side I crawled over to her body and placed my hands around her head "Sarah!" My voice cracked and became frail as fear began to dart through my body. I unstrapped my helmet and threw it to the ground. I then slowly took off Sarah's helmet. I stared downward at her dusty brown face which was speckled with red droplets. I began to wipe the dirt from her forehead when her eyes slowly opened.
"Jacob, is that you?"
"Yeah Sarah, It's me" I replied in a reassuring tone
"You look like shit Jacob" Sarah whimpered as I took hold of her hand.
"You don't look too good yourself Sarah" I replied softly trying to hold back my emotion.
"So, how bad is it?" She asked. I looked down at my other gloved hand. It was stained with a dark red fluid seeping from a gaping tear in Sarah's armour. Trying to hide my sudden recognition of this fatal injury I smiled and looked into her eyes
"It's just a scratch" I said hesitantly "You can walk this off." There was a pause before Sarah creased her lips and smiled. She seemed to realise her time was short and her life was now seeping onto the earth. Her face became pale and her hand began to shake.
"Jacob" Sarah began "I never got to tell you this, but you are one hell of a soldier..." With her other hand Sarah reached into her pocket and pulled out something. She lifted it up and placed it my hand then rolled my fist over it with hers, thus preventing me seeing what she had given me. She took one last breath and finished her sentence"...but you are an even better friend, and it's been an honour to stand beside you in battle" As slowly as they had opened her eyes began to close. Opening my fist I tilted my head downward, in my hand was the necklace I gave Sarah when I first met her, inscribed with the words 'All powers are within you, you can do anything and everything' Wiping away the tear that has escaped down my cheek I stood up. I had lost everything; I was alone in this empty desolate valley, surrounded only by the dead. The deceased of friends and foes alike strewn across the land. The silence was alien to me, it was terrifying, and it was the realisation of knowing I was the only one left. With my strength fading I fell to my knees, clutching the necklace. I took one last breath and turned onto my back. In my last breath I whispered the words "I'll be there soon Sarah"

CKC2009 responds:

thanks?

[Morgan's Song]

My lyrics

Side by side my feet walk
my mouth moves but I don't talk
Alone on this empty street
Just looking down at my feet

Wondering why this happened so fast
Looking forward but my mind in the past
Curious as to where this road goes
I think I have this solved but do I really know

Woahhh I really can't do this on my own
I just need to be shown

Wait till guitar gets louder

I just wish I could take back what I said,
Just wish I could clear my head
Oh baby I wish I could say sorry
Just wish I listened to your side of the story
Baby, I know I did wrong
That's why I am writing this song
To tell you It'll be okay
Okay, okay for us one day

I don't pretend to know how this story goes
But I know there are no real heroes
I am the vilian who threw it all away
I just couldn't be happy when it went my way

So now I walk seldom and truly know why
But I can't turn around as hard as I try
Facing the music is something I can't do
If I had to just choose between me or you
it would always be you

Always just you
Oh always you
Just you, woah just you

I just wish I could take back what I said,
Just wish I could clear my head
Oh baby I wish I could say sorry
Just wish I listened to your side of the story
Baby, I know I did wrong
That's why I am writing this song
To tell you It'll be okay
Okay, okay for us one day

Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's be okay
Woahhhhhhhhhh I know I Did wrong
Just let me say I am so sorry

Wait till the guitar changes chords

So now here we are, together again
will it last we don't know
Do I tempt fate again
Do I really want to know

I just want to carry on like before
Pretend I never walked out that door
Just hold each other and forget the past
Togetther we'll make this last, oh we will

Wiat till the guitar get louder again

Baby, I know I did wrong
That's why I am writing this song
To tell you It'll be okay
Okay, okay for us one day

The sun sets on this day
And together we lay
watching the day fade away
Tomorrow is a new day

chompinator74 responds:

Great stuff man, never been much of a lyricist myself obviously, but if you can download this and sync a vocal track over it I'd love to hear it and maybe republish it up here with your credit

[Skyline (Moosheep)]

It's as if a child got a hold of some Dj decks

Not very good buddy. Good try......but falls at the first hurdle. sorry

M00SHEEP responds:

Nice and constructive (Y)

[Our Special Place...Remember?]

Magix Software I had that

I used to have this, used nearly all these sounds. The piano is in Movie Sounds. Memories

lanky21 responds:

Yup, that's what I'm using. The circle of life continues.....

[[RM] - Night Time WIP2]

eXtreme G

This is the kind of music I would want to hear playing a new version of Extreme G (Nintendo 64)

This would fit so well in a futuristic metropolis. Flashing lights and star crusiers floating over head. Through tunnels that travel under the cities sea and high above the tallest buildings then a great drop from the top of the city, through star ship doings bays and skyscrapers being built back down into the cities glow

Randomizor responds:

Thanks.

[Evil-Dog - Outbreak]

love it

The world we once called home is nothing more than sand and skulls.
On October 3rd a new drug known only has MGV-1 was released upon the public by the leading drug research company, Mara corporation.
This new drug was the cure for HIV.
The cure for humanity
For twenty three years HIV seemed to almost vanish from the planet.
For Twenty three years HIV was forgotten about
For Twenty three whole years HIV was no longer a threat and humanity flourished.

I was thirteen when the first case was reported
It began in the states. People began to slip into permanent coma
First it was only small towns, then whole cities, one by one went silent.
Soon 12 billion people fell soundless.
I am but one survivor in only thousands left.
And this is my account of the fall mankind

Evil-Dog responds:

Wow nice, I Am Legend 2.0 :)

[CKC - Tide]

Lyrics to go with??

Add some lyrics in there could make it a coll club song

Very good though, enjoyed it!!!

CKC2009 responds:

MAYBE..

[KTR/WF1 Moments of Inspiration]

Thanking you greatly

Recently I have been struggling to find inspiration for a new short story I wish to write, but after hearing this the ideas have come flooding back, of course once it is written all credit will go to you and your user name, once again I thank you

P.s a marvellous piece both calming yet adventurous, truly fantastic work
Thank you again EG330

KTRECORDS responds:

Whenever you get your short story done, Send us a link or something so we can check it out! Thanks!

-Jason
KTRECORDS